| [...] in the first scene of the video that shows a “floppy body,” the baby’s movements are strange and don’t demonstrate the situation adequately. |
Yes |
The newborn’s expression was modified in order to facilitate understanding for the target audience and make the animation more in line with reality. |
| [...] I suggest that the nurse in the video move her mouth while speaking, as this makes it seem like it’s just a static illustration. |
Yes |
The healthcare professional’s lip movements were altered to make the video more interactive, engaging, and engaging with the viewer. |
| [...] in the video, when she talks about choking on liquids, the baby appears to be smiling. |
Yes |
The newborn’s expression was modified to make the images and scenes more appropriate and relevant to the emergency. |
| [...] the narration is slow; you could consider reducing the video’s length, perhaps speeding up the narration slightly. The content is quite clear, with a well-structured explanation and excellent diction, but the current pace seems a bit slow, which could make it difficult to maintain the target audience’s interest. |
Yes |
Although the topic involves several specificities and requires adequate synthesis to present the key points clearly, to avoid distractions and disinterest from the target audience, a slight change was made to the video speed, resulting in a shorter running time. |
| [...] you could consider reducing the video’s length, perhaps speeding up the narration slightly. |
Yes |
The video was sped up slightly to make it more dynamic. |
| [...] the transition from screen 7:11 to 7:12 is overlapping, with the family appearing behind the speech bubble. Also in this part, when it says that cardiopulmonary resuscitation is needed, the choking maneuvers continue to appear in the thought bubble. I think it would be interesting to show the nurse performing compressions on the baby in the thought bubble to avoid confusion. |
Yes |
Scene error adjusted with the responsible professional, as well as added scene of the healthcare professional performing compressions on the thought bubble. |
| [...] I think it’s important to explain cardiopulmonary resuscitation maneuvers. |
No |
This topic was not included in the video to avoid making it too long. |
| [...] I think the technique of displaying the letters interferes with the audio and reading! I suggest removing the animation on the letters. |
No |
The animation was maintained to make the video more engaging, as leaving the letters still would have made the video monotonous. |
| [...] it doesn’t mention the appropriate time to perform the maneuvers. |
No |
The literature suggests that the maneuver can be performed as many times as necessary. |
| [...] the video is long; I suggest removing the introduction and focusing more on the choking maneuvers. |
No |
Removing these initial scenes would have decontextualized the video and fragmented the storytelling. Furthermore, this introduction allows families to feel represented. |
| [...] if you turn the baby over onto her back, apply compressions, and she still doesn’t choke? Add it to the video. |
No |
Throughout the video, the video covers the step-by-step process of how to expel a newborn’s breath and, if this fails, call emergency services or the fire department. |